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Nine Maidens

Moth lay awake, listening. She was always listening. For her, the night was alive with a thousand sounds. And tonight every one of her senses was heightened by the ritual mushroom stew that had made her dream so vividly and kept Shana twitching against her.
  Winter held the land in its frozen grip, though inside the cave the embers of the fire kept the worst of the chill at bay. Beneath the heavy bearskin Moth and Shana lay curled together, sharing their body warmth. They had done so for as long as Moth could remember. In all her nine summers she had never known a day without her older sister’s presence.
   Shana was the older by two summers. The swiftest, the merriest, the best beloved. First to laugh at a butterfly’s flight, first to weep over a fledgling tossed from its nest, first to sing, first to dance, first to exclaim over father’s wounds if he came in from the hunt bleeding.
    But Shana was not the first to find the herbs needed to stem the bleeding. No, leave that to fumbling, stumbling Moth, the runt of the litter.
    Half blind since birth, seeing everything through mist, Moth had never run with the rest, nor laughed and danced as they did. She stayed behind with the old ones, scraping hides and weaving cloth, listening to wise-woman Brekk ramble on about runes and rites, bones and herbs, with the great bear skull sitting on its ledge listening. Moth too had listened, watched everything that was done, heard all that was said. Too much, perhaps.
    Now, she heard her father shifting beside the young woman he had chosen as companion after mother died. In a deep corner old Brekk snored through her toothless maw, while around her others of the clan breathed and shuddered and dreamed in the drugged aftermath of last night’s feasting. She heard the night wind breathing harsh and cold against the mouth of the cave, the spring bubbling despite its coating of ice, trickling down over rough stones towards the stream in the snow-caked valley.
    A change in Shana’s breathing told Moth her sister was also awake.
    ‘Moth!’ The whisper was a hot breath in the darkness as hard fingers dug into Moth’s flesh. ‘I know you’re awake! Listen! Do you hear them?’
    Moth said nothing. She lay still, breathing lightly, feigning sleep. The night was deep and dark. All too soon she would have to stir and begin this particular new day. It had to come. But not yet. Not yet.
    Her wakened senses discovered a wolf howling far away. She felt the moonlight bright on the snow-clad earth, and the great silent weight of the glacier to the north. It was creeping closer again, less than four days’ journey away now. If it was not stopped, disaster would follow. In the heart of winter, fear stalked the earth.
    Despite the warmth of the bearskin around her, Moth shivered. The coming day was Solstice. The shortest, darkest day of the year, when the sun was at it farthest point. When it might slip over the rim of the world and never return. She was aware of the earth, the Great Goddess, waiting -- not sleeping as humans did when darkness came, but watchful and listening. As Moth herself was listening. Waiting for the first grey light of dawn, for the first skein of geese to gaggle overhead, for the first ray of sunlight to halo the crest of Midwinter Hill.
    The sun was all. If it should go away then all would be lost. Come winter, come summer, the rites must be played out correctly, the steps trod, the songs sung, the spells cast, the blood given. This winter in particular, with the great ice sheets threatening once more to engulf the land, the people must conjure their deepest magic.
    Today, when the time came, Moth knew which life would be forfeit to the gods. 
    ‘Listen!’ Shana sat up beside her. Moth heard the excited quickening of her sister’s breath, sensed the pounding of a small, sturdy heart, the rush of blood through young veins. ‘Moth, wake up! Listen! Don’t you hear them too? It’s the stones! The stones are singing!’
     Moth heard them. She had heard them all her life.
     ‘They do,’ she said, very low.
    Maybe Shana didn’t hear her. Maybe she didn’t want to hear. She was often impatient with her useless little sister. ‘You sit too much with the old women!’ she would scold. ‘You’re becoming one of them.’ Now she leapt to her feet, hissing, ‘I’m going out to see.’
    ‘It’s too soon!’ Moth protested.
     ‘I’m going! You needn’t come. Not if you’re afraid.’ And with that challenge she was gone, making off toward the cave opening.
     To Moth’s dim eyes the cave’s mouth was no more than a paler smudge in the darkness. But the stones were calling to her, too. They sang an alluring song, much as old Brekk did when she hummed softly and drew the little deer to venture within reach of her sharp spear. Or when she went out among the thorn scrub at night and sat crooning with the owls and the wildcats, a song so soft you heard it with your scalp and the soles of your feet rather than with your ears.
    Those same sharp senses – a gift from the gods who had formed her body so clumsily -- allowed Moth to weave her way past the sleeping bodies in the cave, past the embers whose wispy smoke smelled sweetly of pine, dulling the sour, nose-wrinkling tang emanating from Gart’s body as he slumped over his spear. He was supposed to be keeping watch but after the festivities of the previous night he had succumbed to the drowsiness induced by mushroom stew and fermented berries. He drank too much berry juice and he loved wild garlic; it gave him a peculiar body odour that Moth could tell among a score of others – just as she could tell her sister, or her father, or any of the others of her tribe -- even in the darkness of a moonless night.
    Alerted by a tingling across her scalp, she glanced back to where in the depths of the cave the darkness revealed nothing but the dancing lights behind her own eyes. Even so, she knew Brekk was watching her. ‘Go...’ came the old woman’s thought across the night. ‘Go to your destiny, child...’
     Moth didn’t shiver. The chill was too deep for that. Colder than ice. Her very soul felt the heaviness of what lay before her. Today was the day. The sacrifice had to be made.
    Reaching into the pouch at her waist, Moth took out her piece of dried mushroom and began to chew on it, feeling its magic work to widen her senses.
     Despite the misting shadows that clouded her sight, she felt the starshine. Their soft light prickled, caressing her skin. She knew that the old moon lay on her back low down in a cloudless sky ablaze with silver speckles, with the seven stars of the Great Bear watching, waiting. Starlight lent a pale grey tint to the world, reflecting from the snow-bound land, from the ice-field and the white mountains to the north. Out in the open air it was seldom totally dark, especially when your senses were alive to every sound, every scent, every nuance of meaning in the lilt of the earth-song and the rippling, shimmering streams of power that linked every living thing. You didn’t need sharp eyes to sense those things. They sang in your blood and along your skin, a whisper across your cheek, a sigh stirring every tiny hair on your body. Tonight it was more potent than ever. It was always at its most potent on midwinter eve, when everything waited for the sun’s coming. Would it rise, or had it gone forever?
    The stones’ song was louder now. Moth heard it, away down the hill where the stunted willows bent along the ice-lined path of the stream. That was where Shana had gone, answering the call to the gathering place. Impulsive as ever, unable to sleep with her nerves atwitch, she had gone alone to begin the dance.
 
When first the glaciers began to shift and retreat – when the people had wandered northward seeking shelter, following the hares and the elk herds (so the stories told) – this place of hills and caves had declared itself as a place of power. The first great stone had been waiting, a huge slab of grey rock carefully placed by some giant hand. Balanced on a pivot point, it would rock to and fro at the slightest touch. It was a sacred emblem, a wonder, a gathering place for prayer and sacrifice. Until the time when winter’s grip hardened again and the glaciers began to creep back towards the place of caves.
     That coldest of years, when the sun dwindled toward midwinter the people had feared it might never return. Despite dancing, prayers and bonfires the winter bit hard, turning all the land to rock and the waters to ice. By night the skies were clear and cold, as clear and cold and hard as the stare of the Great Bear. The people despaired.
     Then at the solstice (so the stories told) a great storm arose. The earth itself shook and the sky trembled with a thousand thundering voices. Lightning struck the sacred rocking stone. Sent it tumbling from its height. The people fled from the wrath of the gods. But when the stone came to rest, tall and upright, its narrow end buried deep in the ground, beneath it lay Ganhir, the chief’s only son, a fine strong warrior eighteen summers old. His blood and bone had gone back to join Mother Earth.
     Thus the gods made their choice. Thus they erected the first stone. The He-stone.
     The gods had been pleased. They had kept faith. Once again the ice had begun to retreat. But every few years (so the stories told) deeper winter gripped the land and then again the people feared. Over time, the runes decreed that the He-stone must have companions. Over time, succeeding wise-women divined there should be nine companions in all. Three times three, most sacred of numbers. Nine maidens to dance around the He-stone. Nine smaller stones to weave an eternal circle, to guard the land, to stop the ice, to bring back the sun.
     No one ever spoke of the deep magic that was needed to raise the stones. Moth had never seen it done. Her father had been a boy when the eighth Maiden-stone joined her seven sisters. Even so, Moth knew.
     She hardly felt the cold. Her head was still buzzing from the flesh and juices of the sacred mushrooms Brekk had prepared last night. Everyone partook of that stew at feast time. Everyone. It was what made them sleep so deep on solstice eve and kept the babies quiet. For Moth herself it always summoned strange dreams and even stranger visions; more often it kept her awake, every sense heightened and attuned to the clamouring rhythm of the life-force that flowed throughout the natural world.
     For Shana, by contrast, the mushroom broth made her laugh and shout louder, increased her playfulness. And her wilfulness. That was why she had got up so early and gone out to the place of stones. That was why she had heard, possibly for the first time, the song that Moth had heard many times before – the song of the standing stones.
     Tonight the strange other-worldly harmonies of that song were near to blending. The stones called for the closing of their circle. They called Moth to follow in her sister’s wake. She knew all too clearly what her destiny must be.
     On the edge of the hollow, she paused and reached out around her, opening all her senses. She was not alone. There was Shana, down in the hollow dreamily stamping out the path of the ritual dance. And behind Moth the others were beginning to gather. They had felt the call, too. Dawn was coming. It was time.
     The ninth stone – the last She-stone – the one that would complete the circle and ensure the magic for ever -- stood only a few paces from the hole prepared for it, where it would stand for eternity to secure the blessing of the gods. All it required now was the pure young blood to secure its foundation. The lifeblood of a ninth maiden.
     Moth had long imagined how it would feel when the cool knife bit deep and the hot blood sprang forth. She had lived through it on many sleepless nights. Did the spirit truly rise with the rising sun (as the stories told), dancing far above the dark damp earth where the crumpled body lay safe in the bosom of the Great Mother. And then the stone would drop, crushing bone and flesh, shutting out the light, the air...
     She waited. Standing calm and straight on the edge of the clearing, with low scrubby trees all around and the starlight waning as the first grey light of dawn showed pale above Midwinter Hill. Behind her, old Brekk clambered up to stand flat-footed on a slab of rock, swathed in her ritual bearskin robe, her long staff in her hand as she faced the hilltop. Silent. Waiting. Moth didn’t need to see her to know she was there.
     All of the people were coming now, called from slumber by soundless voices, emerging from caves honeycombed among the hills, until the whole tribe gathered, half a hundred or more. Mushroom liquor had numbed their minds and now more pieces of dried mushroom served as a heady breakfast to widen senses and open the sacred ways. The people felt themselves as one, blending with the earth and the sky. Feeling the sun’s approach.
     As the light grew, Moth sensed the nameless power rising like mist from the earth to gather all living beings into its web. It was claiming her, too. Drawing her to accept. So it had been. So it was. So it must ever be. That the sky may not fall, nor the seas flow over, nor the earth crack and belch flame. All would be well so long as the people kept faith. For ever and for ever. She sensed them all -- the men and the women, the youths and the maidens, the little children, the beasts being drawn to join in, the birds, the insects, the iced water from the spring, the snow on the grass, and the new day’s dawning... All must play their part if the sun was to go on rising, the ice retreating, the moon and stars gently circling...
     Shana was dancing with the other maidens now. They waved long branches of dark, aromatic pine, sweeping them now high, now low, twining the warp with the weft. Some of the older women moved to join in, swaying and stepping around and among the stones, weaving an intricate, mystical pattern. Their dance captured the threads of power that enmeshed the whole earth. Strand by strand, they wove a living web that Moth felt ever more strongly. Invisible to mortal eyes the earth-force sparkled and shimmered, weaving into its pattern the central He-stone and the eight smaller stones that circled him, until the stones themselves seemed to be dancing.
     Trembling with the force of the magic, feeling it well up from somewhere inside her, Moth took a deep breath. The power brimmed over. It emerged from her throat as a single pure note. Old Brekk added her own energy, a discordant cry that jarred with awful precision. Someone else blew on a strident reed flute. For a moment the separate sounds screeched across Moth’s teeth and hurt her head, but then the others began to hum. Slowly, like a living thing feeling its way from darkness into blinding light, the chord shaped itself into a terrible harmony. The force of it glanced among the gathered people, among the trees, among the stones. The air thrummed with it, touching all of the dancers who stamped and whirled, bending and rising, in and out. The thread they wove with their steps had widened. It was twined now around the ninth and final stone, drawing it into the dance.
     One or two of the babies began to wail. The chord of power took the new sound and added it to the song. Wordless words added their chant, weaving it with the rising web of power. And all the time the light was growing. The shape of sunrise hill showed clear now, limned with light.
     Moth found herself part of the dance. All of the people were a part of it now, stamping and leaping to a rhythm that blended all the world into one living entity. Moth saw it as a blur of sound, scent and shifting ribbons of light. The standing stones were dancing too. Moth moved with them, taking her place as she had known she must. The rhythm vibrated in blood and heartbeat, in the tumult of a cold wind rising, the cry of geese overhead, in tingling feet that trod the pulsating earth beneath a sky where blue was chasing grey.
     Moth knew the moment when the power grew to a pitch that allowed the final stone, the last She-stone, to lift from its waiting place as easily as if it were a pebble. Brekk walked by it, chanting, a strange inhuman figure in her long fur cloak, wearing the great bear skull as a crown. The power seemed to leap around her, bathing her in light. Several of the strongest men had gathered round the stone, each man placing a hand against it to guide it. Bringing it home to complete the sacred circle.
     In front of Moth the hole in the earth gaped. Deeper than a grave. Black and raw, it had been dug during yesterday’s festival, before the feast and the drinking and the mushroom stew. She felt it waiting. A maw to be filled. Her head rang with the tumult of sound and motion as the maidens gathered round her. Shana was with them. Garlanded in pine. Laughing. Behind her the last She-stone floated, moving closer. Shana’s eyes were wide, the blue almost eclipsed by irises widened and blackened by the drug. She laughed as she tore the prickly garland from her hair and crowned Moth with it, saying, ‘Yours, I believe.’
     In that moment the rim of the sun lifted above the hill. Golden light blinded Moth. She sensed the cold sharp blade of the knife as it lifted against that light. Her scream added the final note to the earth’s song.
     The blood was shed. The body laid in the pit. The stone fell. The thud of its planting reverberated through the world as a final howling ululation greeted the circle’s completing.

 * * *

Listen!’
     The single word caused all chatter to cease. All eyes turned to the wise-woman. One word, pitched just so, could summon the power a shaman commanded.
     Every time Moth spoke that word it brought pain. It made her smile, and it made her want to weep. It was a reminder. Of the day the power came in full force. The day she knew she was destined to inherit old Brekk’s cloak. The day the last of the Nine Maidens joined the sacred circle. So long ago.
     Gladly would Moth have changed places with her sister. But the sacrifice had to be of the finest. The swiftest, the merriest, the first to laugh, the first to dance... Not the runt, the one who lived in a world of shadows, sitting beside the fire, learning from the old and, now in her own old age, teaching the young.
     ‘Listen!’ she said again, and as eager young faces lifted to hers she did not regret her place in the pattern of things. ‘Do you hear them? Do you hear the nine maidens singing? One day, I promise, you shall see them dance.’

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About this story

Imagine the magical building, eons ago, of one of the ancient rings of standing stones which are dotted around the world, particularly in Britain.

Such sites are believed to have been sacred places for the people who made them. Chris and I have, as you might expect, visited Stonehenge, the most famous of all, and Avebury, not to mention many smaller sites around Britain. We also went to the stone circle at Callanish, up in the wild and windswept Hebrides, on a dark October day. With a sky full of scudding black cloud and a howling gale slashing freezing rain, we could well imagine the echoes of dark deeds and ancient mysteries still lingering round that bleak place on the peaty moor.

So I wondered how, and why, such a circle might have been made, long ago, when people still remembered how to summon the harmonies of the Earth Mother.

Gaia... she has always intrigued me. This story is the result.

For more evidence of my obsession with ancient times, see the Poems section.

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